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“Keep this kiss with you until we meet again”
Those were the last words you said to me,
As you kissed the tears from my eyes.

Then giving me the only kiss I ever wanted,
You left me standing there and I died a little inside that day
As you left my heart broken and alone

You held me and I didn’t want you to let go
This good bye was the only on I knew would last forever
As you took my hand and held it one last time.

“Oh my God it’s happening,
You say we’ll see each other again but I know that’s not true”
The only words that could exscape my lips,

Your eyes looked so sad that day,
The only time I knew I couldn’t make that go away, I felt the same way
This is the last time I think of you,

Good bye.
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the only good bye i ever/never wanted...

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:iconlady-divine:
So sad... :hug:

Your writing is simple but strong in emotions.. I like that.. keep it up..

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:iconjesusfreak16:
thank you so much for your kind words. :hug:
i certanly will look at your gallary :D

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Gracie, I love you, you are amazing and so is this! I love it!

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Aw how tear-jerkingly lovely :( / :)
I hate that feeling :) / :(

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:iconjesusfreak16:
aw thank you..i'm sorry if i made you cry...
yes it 'tis a oddly wonderful bad feeling....if that makes any sence at all

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i don't believe friends are the people you like best their merely the people that got there first
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nah u didnt; i wanted to, but i kept myself together :D
well its a horrible feeling, but it makes for wonderful writing :)

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:coffeemachine: Because nothing says love like your very own coffeemachine.

Ask me about barnacles, you won't regret it. (sometimes, it is what you've got, not just where you stick it.)
:iconjesusfreak16:
ok, this makes me feel slightly less guilty but still the whole horrible feeling thing...i'm sorry but yes very good writing...unfortunatly....

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